Showing posts with label Week 12. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 12. Show all posts

Thursday, April 14, 2016

Week 12 Storytelling: The Two Sons

Deep in the jungle there lives a family of apes. On the outside they seem to be the typical family. The father goes to work every day picking bananas out of trees on the assembly line. The mother stays home with her two precious twin boys. They seem to be an all around normal family. What nobody else sees though is that one of the twins receives more favor than the other. Jake and his twin Blake never really did get along. They fought and wrestled and threw bananas at each other’s heads every chance they got. Somehow, Blake always got away without any punishment, while Jake got banished to the highest spot in the tree.

Baby Apes
FromPixabay


Jake and Blake followed similar paths until they reached the age of college. They needed to learn what kind of jobs they wanted to do so that they didn’t have to work the assembly line like their father. Jake had always excelled at school, while Blake had a little more trouble. This never affected Blake’s grades though, seeing as his mother would just do the work for him. Jake had to learn for himself, and in the meantime he became very independent. This is why when the twins got to college Jake was right at home. He made a ton of friends, and was doing better than ever in all of his classes. Blake on the other hand was failing miserably.

After a few months Blake couldn’t handle the work. He had never had to do so much in his life! He didn’t know how to manage his time or even how to do most of the work at all. He decided he would go home to mommy, and she would fix everything like she always did.

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Two years later Jake was graduating early from college with honors. He had so many job offers he didn’t know which to take. He also had the perfect girlfriend, who was soon to be his wife. His life couldn’t be going better, much to his mother’s annoyance. Blake on the other hand was the complete opposite. He was still living at home, and his mother still babied him to no end. He didn’t have a job, and did not seem to be wanting to get one anytime soon. His mother was getting fed up with him, and couldn’t handle him always being home. She decided it was time for him to leave the nest whether he was ready or not. Blake was kicked out of his home, and was not allowed to return.

In the end Blake ended up scrounging for food, and for places to stay. He never really could function in society because everything had been done for him. He had no work ethic. His brother, Jake, ended up becoming the leader of the tribe, and going down in history for being one of the best. He had taken all of his frustrations of never being good enough, and turned them into success.





Author’s Note: I wrote this story based on The Ape and Her Two Brats. In the original story she favors the one twin, and when terror strikes she puts her favorite under her arm to carry him, and the other on her back. As she heads down the tree her favorite’s head is smashed against a rock, and ends up dying. She is left with the other child. I wanted to take this not so literally, and show that it ended up hurting her to favor the one child. It was worse in the end for the one she loved the most, and she saw that the other went on to succeed despite her own role in holding him back.




Bibliography: An Ape and her Two Brats from Fables of Aesop and Other Eminent Mythologists by Roger L'Estrange (1692).

Week 12 Reading Diary Continued: The Trusty Dog and His Master


For the second half of my reading I liked “A Trusty Dog andHis Master.” Even though it was a sad story, I like that it showed that sometimes when you act too fast your actions cannot be undone. Sometimes the consequences may not be as severe as  killing your own dog, but there are many bad consequences to acting before thinking or getting to the bottom of the real problem. For this story I would like to change it by putting it into a high school setting. I would have two girls who had been friends since they were little. They would do everything together and be pretty much inseparable. One day one of the girls would hear a rumor that someone started about her, and it would be something she thought only her best friend knew. She would be furious and storm the hallways looking for her supposed friend. Whens he eventually found her friend she would call her out for saying such a terrible thing about her, and fight back using some saved up secrets that her friend had told her. Everyone in the school would witness this huge blowup. After the girl is done yelling at her friend, her friend would tell her that she never started any rumor, and wouldn’t even think of doing what she had just done. After this all was over they would not be friends ever again, and the one who had spilled all the other’s secrets would find out that it was actually a different girl that had started the rumor about her.

Can You Keep a Secret?
From Jinterwas

Tuesday, April 12, 2016

Week 12 Reading Diary: The Ape and her Two Brats


This week I chose to read Aesop’s fables, instead of continuing with Alice because I wanted to change it up a little bit. I found one story I really liked in particular which was The Ape and Her Two Brats. I really liked the irony of how she doted so much on her one child, and that ended up being that child’s demise. Instead of having one of the children actually dying in my story I want them to end up failing at everything he does in life. This will show that since everything has been done for him or handed to him he will not know how to survive on his own. The other child, however, will be incredibly successful. He will end up being the leader of the pack because of his wit and ability to come up with solutions to problems no one else could. Since this child had been neglected he had to do everything on his own, and find creative solutions to problems that his brother would just have mommy solve for him. It will show how coddling and smothering rarely pay off in the future for these children. They end up getting into situations that they cannot always fix. I will have the unsuccessful one living at home because he was never able to leave home for long enough to find a job or go to school even. At the end it will be a tragic fate for the coddled one because his mother will see that his brother is being extremely successful and switch her favor to him. The other will end up alone because his mother kicked him out after all this.

Apes
From Wiki Commons