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When Sam got to his station, he looked at the board to see what surgeries were already scheduled, and what his plan looked like for the night. There were 7 surgeries in the next 7 hours! He looked around for the little red headed nurse named Kayla he was accustomed to being paired with, but she wasn’t anywhere to be seen. He went to ask the head nurse on duty to see where she was. When he asked her, she said they were extremely short staffed tonight because of the storm. He asked again where his nurse was, but was not expecting to hear what the head nurse had to say.
Kayla had been one of the people in the pile up, and was in the ICU.
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What now? Sam decided that not having that many nurses weren’t a huge deal. In his mind they didn’t really do that much anyways, so everything would go on as it usually did. The head nurse told Sam that the nurses that were here were rotating among all the surgeons getting people prepped for the surgeries they needed, but that may take a little longer than usual. Sam went to go prep for his upcoming surgery that was scheduled within the next hour. He waited three hours instead of one though. Finally his patient was ready, but they had lost so much valuable time. This went on all night with all of his surgeries.
After his shift was over, Sam went to see Kayla to check up on her, and see if she needed anything. Before he got there though he decided to get her some flowers and a card as a thanks for everything she does. He had never quite realized what a valuable part of his team she was, until she was no longer there. After this experience, Sam started being a lot nicer to the nurses on his team, and doing nice little things for them every once in a while. He realized that everyone has an important role, even if they don’t seem like it. The hospital is a cohesive team, and every part is needed to make it work properly.
Author’s Note: This story was adapted from the story of the body parts in Aesop’s Fables by Jacobs. For this story I thought about a place where every person would be crucial for success, and came up with a hospital (probably because I am obsessed with Grey’s Anatomy right now). I think most work places are like this though. Everyone has a crucial role to play, and without them things are harder, but sometimes it takes them being missing to fully realize this. This is the goal of this Aesop’s fable. It shows that although someone may not seem like they are contributing as much as someone else, what they are doing is still valuable work, and work that is needed.
Bibliography: “The Belly and the Members” by Jacobs. From Aesop’s Fables: Nature and Inanimate Objects.
Hey Ali! I thought you did a really interesting twist on a classic fable! I too am obsessed with Grey's Anatomy (although I haven't seen the latest season) and can totally see this happening! Many people do not realize how much work nurses really do in a hospital! I also liked that in the end the doctor got Kayla gifts so that she would realize how much she is truly appreciated. I haven't read all of Aesop's fables but I think that the moral of this story is a very important one for people to learn. Everyone does important work no matter what work that is! I liked that you had a picture of the Dallas skyline, which gave a good setting image! I also like how your website's colors really pop against the dark blues in the photo! As a whole, I loved your story and can't wait to see more!
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story. It's more fun for me to read a story when it takes place somewhere that I'm familiar with. The first picture of Dallas grabbed my attention immediately. I love seeing the city of Dallas at night! The lightening in the picture was perfect!
The spacing of your paragraphs worked nicely and make the flow of the story fit with what was happening with the storyline.
You caught me by surprise when I found out Kayla became one of the patients. It brought a very personal note to the moral of the story.
I've never read any of Aesop's Fables, but after reading your story I think I will!
The moral of the story is one that can work for everyone. There are always people in our lives that do more than we realize. It's important for us to thank them every chance we get.
I love Grey's Anatomy as well!
ReplyDeleteIt's really cool how you made a story about Aesop's fables but put a super modern twist on it where Sam realized that he needed to appreciate the other members of his team. I like the way that it played out, where he thought that he was fine without his nurse, but once he was without her realized that he actually needed her.
I really enjoyed reading your story!
I really liked that you used Grey's Anatomy to retell an Aesop's fable! I think using Grey's Anatomy to retell an Aesop's fable is a great way to tell the story in modern times! The only thing I would've suggested is to add some quotes to give you story a little more depth, but overall what a great way to retell an Aesop's fable!
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