Week 10 Storytelling: The Girl Who Caught a Star

There once was a lonely girl who thought she would never find love. The only comfort she found was when she got to spend some time outside at nights. She would frequently go hiking, and one day she traveled a little too far to make it back before nightfall. She found that the stars and the night sky gave her a break from her loneliness. They made her feel like she belonged somewhere, and that the night sky was her true home.  After this discovery she would do anything and everything to make it outside at least for ten minutes each night.  While she was out in the darkness she made friends with some of the animals. They seemed to just love her. She liked to think of herself as a modern snow white because she felt so connected to them. This gave her even more comfort while she basked in the night’s glory. She finally had everything she thought she needed, and she felt loved.

Some nights the girl would think that her life would be perfect if only she could just be a part of the night sky. She wished desperately to have something concrete to hold from it. She would confide this all to a little fox that had taken a liking to sitting with her. Each night she would think about how much better off she would be if she could float up and become one with the sky. She knew that this would never happen, of course.

Sleeping Under the Stars
By Ed Ogle

It had been some time, and the girl was getting a little upset that she could not be more connected with the one thing she loved so dearly. On this particular night she was very down. Even her little fox could not bring her comfort. Right when she was about to give up all hope of ever being close to the night sky, something strange started to happen. It looked as if a star was coming closer to her. Not as much as a shooting star, but like it was gracefully just floating towards her. It kept getting closer and closer. The girl thought it must be a trick of the eye. Starts don’t just float towards the earth! This was certainly nothing normal.

After watching this occurance for about fifteen minutes the star was still getting closer. In fact it was almost right on top of her. The girl decided to be brave, and reached out towards the star to see if she could possibly catch it! If so it would really be a dream come true. The star would bring her everything she had wished for, and would mean she would always be close to the night sky. When she reached out her hand actually touched it! She had caught a star! It was little, and not hot. It was still lit, and so beautiful. This truly was a miracle. Now whenever the girl feels like a day is just dragging on she pulls out her star, and it reminds her of her true love, and how they can now be together forever.

Author’s Note: This story came from the Tejas Caddoan tribe. In the original an indian woman wanders into the desert and does not make it back before night. She falls in love with a star, and wants to be with it so badly that she contemplates killing herself to be there.  A witch instead turns her into a tree so that she can always see her star when it is out. The star then falls and lands white blossoms on the tree, so they will be together forever. In my story I wanted to modernize it a little bit, and have a girl fall in love with the night sky in general. I liked the idea of her having a piece of it to take with her, instead of being turned into something that stays outside. I also included the animals to kind of take the place of the witch, and to help comfort her a little bit.

Bibliography: The Maiden WhoLoved a Star from When the Storm God Rides: Tejas and Other Indian Legends retold by Florence Stratton and illustrated by Berniece Burrough (1936).